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1705004208 ● 先说香。作者不说“圣诞节的种种香味是多么的可爱”,他说“圣诞节就是种种香味”。这句话似嫌武断,但是连以下几段的sounds,tastes,sights一起看,圣诞节的可爱本来就在种种感觉上的享受,这样的说法也许不算不伦不类吧?
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1705004210 ● 事实上这一段所描写的不尽是嗅觉,如from the cold的cold为触觉,bright, painted toys的bright, painted为视觉,但是这些东西都有它们的香味,作者就抓住了这一点来描写。假如读者读了这段文章,似乎鼻子里也嗅到这些圣诞节特有的香味,那么作者的写法就成功了。
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1705004212 ● 好的描写文章是要叫读者眼睛能看到,耳朵能听到,鼻子能嗅到,嘴能尝到。这就是所谓“具体描写”。若要文章不空洞不浮泛,平日应多多注意“眼、耳、鼻、舌、身”的感觉经验。
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1705004214 ● 圣诞节的香味一种是从外面来的:“从冷空气里飘到火炉边上,雪花的香和天地间圣洁(sanctity)之气所混合而成的一种特别的香味。”perfume:香水,香味。blend:混合物。a blend of perfume:几种香水配合而成的特别香水。这里当然是指特别的香气。
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1705004216 ● holly:冬青(叶厚角尖,红果小圆如珠,多用于圣诞装饰。按:好莱坞之“好莱”即由此得名)。fir:枞树,想必就是供在屋内的圣诞树。of holly与前面的of snow平行。
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1705004218 ● unmistakable:不致被人误认的,明明白白的。scent of happiness:快乐的气氛。这个跟上面的scent of sanctity,其实都需要用内心去体会,与感官声色之娱不同。但是作者认为这种圣洁肃穆之气象和融融泄泄的快乐,都是可以用鼻子嗅得出来的。
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1705004220 ● it is buried的it代表the scent of happiness。
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1705004222 Christmas is sounds—the talking and the laughing, the shouting and the singing of childhood’s hymns—the tinkling of the music box, which says “Hosanna” in the child’s language of gladness, no matter if it is only saying, “This is the way we wash our clothes, wash our clothes!” in English.
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1705004224 ● 这一段讲种种声音。
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1705004226 ● hymns:圣歌。tinkling:叮叮咚咚的声音。music box:八音盒(开发条以后发出简单的曲调声音)。
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1705004228 ● Hosanna:希伯来文颂赞上帝之声。原意是“求主救苦救难”。
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1705004230 ● This is the way we wash our clothes…:这是一支简单的儿歌,小孩一面唱一面模仿洗衣服的动作。注意这里的the way同第一段里的the way可以相互参证。
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1705004232 ● 儿童不知赞美上帝,但是他们心里的快乐,其实就是对于造物主的一种赞美。因此八音盒里所奏的虽然只是一支小小儿歌,事实上这就是赞美上帝的颂词。
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1705004234 ● in English和in the child’s language of gladness前后对照。儿歌是用英文唱的,赞美上帝的颂词是用哪一国话说的呢?儿童赞美上帝是在心里,八音盒所奏的音乐,是用儿童“心里的语言”来赞美上帝的。儿童心里,纯然欢乐,所以说是“儿童心里欢乐的语言了”。
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1705004236 Christmas is tastes—the round, golden taste of the orange—the taste of the perfect sphere, which has hung among the green leaves in the warm sun. It is the red-and-white-striped taste of peppermint. It is the sharp, sweet juice of the apple from the toe of the stocking. Many tastes must blend to make the taste of Christmas.
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1705004238 ● round, golden taste of the orange:圆是橙子的形状,金黄是橙子的色泽,怎么橙子的味道成了round, golden taste呢?这样把感觉印象错综的应用,近人作品(尤其是新诗)中例子很多,望读者善加体会。
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1705004240 ● the perfect sphere:圆满的球形(这里把橙子当做一种几何形体)。
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1705004242 ● peppermint:薄荷糖。red-and-white-striped:红条白条相间隔的(糖的形状)。
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1705004244 ● sharp:(味道)强烈的,辛辣的。这里作“苹果原味极重的”解。toe袜子的尖头部分。stocking:盛礼物的袜子。
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1705004246 Christmas is sights; who can tell of the sights of Christmas reflected in the eyes of a child?
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1705004248 ● sights:所看到的东西,形形色色。tell of:描述。reflected:反映。圣诞节可看的东西太多,作者不一一列举。
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1705004250 Christmas is being together—gathering together. You do not have to tell a child what this means, and at Christmas, if at no other time, all men are children.
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1705004252 ● being together:阖家团圆。
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1705004254 ● if at no other time:有些人主张大人和小孩本来没有多少分别,这句话在平时是否恰当,姑且不论,至少到了圣诞节,大人都成了小孩子了。
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1705004256 Because it is the child’s day, the coming of Christmas up the white steps of December transforms mothers and fathers into the children they once were—until at last, on Christmas Eve, their caroling beside the tree is with the earnest voice of childhood. And the tears in their eyes are once again the tears caused by great expectations of wondrous things to come.
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