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Glittering like hoar-frost to my wandering eyes;
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Up towards the glorious moon I raise my head,
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Then lay me down—and thoughts of home arise.
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（Herbert A. Giles译）
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颇有韵味，虽然遣词也没有过多的考虑。译者之译笔游刃有余，有所创造，比如：to my wandering eyes。句末韵味最浓：Then lay me down—and thoughts of home arise.
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e. On a Quiet Night
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I saw the moonlight before my couch,
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And wondered if it were not the frost on the ground.
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I raised my head and looked out on the mountain moon,
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I bowed my head and thought of my far-off home.
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（S. Obata译）
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亦有创新。如the mountain moon，这个mountain一添加，就很自然地和下句的my far-off home构成了表象美，同时也构成了非表象美。mountain moon之形象简直呼之欲出，而far-off home之意境则更趋深邃。
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f. The Moon Shines Everywhere
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Seeing the moon before my couch so bright,
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I thought hoar frost had fallen from the night.
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On her clear face I gaze with lifted eyes:
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Then hide them full of Youth’s sweet memories.
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（W. J. B. Fletcher译）
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韵味气质，变味了。很遗憾。李白的诗，洋溢广义的美，模糊的美。当然我们也承认，李白当时当地所想，也许有sweet的成分，也许有her clear face的内容，然而译者尚不熟悉一个基本的语言哲学理念：模糊（fuzziness）是一种艺术，一种语言美，更是诗歌的美。如此翻译，无异于嚼饭与人。
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g. Night Thoughts
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In front of my bed the moonlight is very bright.
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I wonder if that can be frost on the floor.
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I lift up my head and look at the full moon, the dazzling moon.
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I drop my head, and think of the home of old days.
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（Amy Lowell译）
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