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就表象美而言，有创新。若问翻译有何步骤？答：主要分为理解和表达两步。遗憾的是，译者将“故乡”译成My father land与第六首诗的her clear face，异曲同工，不过，此曲并不妙。
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i. Nostalgia
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A splash of white on my bedroom floor. Hoarfrost?
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I raise my eyes to the moon, the same moon.
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As scenes long past come to mind, my eyes fall again on the splash
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of white, and my heart aches for home.
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（翁显良译）
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最佳是开头——A splash of white on my bedroom floor. Hoarfrost？最陋是结尾——my heart aches for home。当然，思乡之情，十有九涩。但绝非一个ache（痛）所能囊括。且情感的这一层纸不能捅破，一旦捅破，诗意全无。
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j. Still Night Thoughts
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Moonlight in front of my bed—
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I took it for frost on the ground!
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I lift my eyes to watch the mountain moon,
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Lower them and dream of home.
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（Burton Watson译）
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朴则近本。
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k. Thoughts in a Still Night
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The luminous moonshine before my bed,
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Is thought to be the frost fallen on the ground.
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I lift my head to gaze at the cliff moon,
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And then bow down to muse on my distant home.
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（孙大雨译）
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两处遣词令全译生辉——the cliff moon和my distant home。
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l. Thoughts on a Silent Night
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Before my bed is a pool of light;
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Can it be frost upon the ground?
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