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Day in day out my room is cleaned with meticulous care to keep it always dust-free, so that it greets me with a pleasant look whenever I return home. No matter how far into the night, there is always a light at that window shining through darkness like a beacon to the one bound for home late. The sight of it, even in the distance, brings warmth from the window all the way to the heart.
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原句的“温暖便从窗口一直注入心底”貌似非人称主语句，其实非也。此句的前句“远远望见”的主语当是“我”！英译却化原句中的“远远望见”为主语The sight of it，再添加even in the distance，妙不可言地导出一个漂亮的Impersonal Subject Sentence！
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·自然现象名词
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于是，暮色中匆匆的人群里，总有我赶路的身影，雨里，雾里，雪里，只盼着早些回家，洗去一身的疲劳，泡上一杯清茶，点上一炷檀香，打开半卷的书卷，一任轻柔的旋律把我带进一个美丽的境界……所有的喧嚣和烦乱都被抛在朔风冷雨里，因为我已经到家了。
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Thus the gathering dark often finds me hastening home in a hurrying crowd. Whether it rains or snows, windy or foggy, it is the longing to be home that quickens my steps. To be home means to end a day’s fatigue and enjoy myself in a world of my own. With a nice cup of tea and a burning sandalwood incense by my side, I can either resume my suspended reading, or listen leisurely to a soft melody and let myself be carried away to a fairyland of beauty… All the urban noises and disturbances are shut out, thrown to the winds and rain, for I am safe at home.
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于是，暮色中匆匆的人群里，总有我赶路的身影。→Thus the gathering dark often finds me hastening home in a hurrying crowd.
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英语的Impersonal Subject Sentence就是具有这样一种魅力！句子的主语在英译时居然被译成了the gathering dark。再者，“只盼着早些回家”也被译者顺手牵羊般地译成了it is the longing to be home that quickens my steps，同样值得读者回味一番，尤其是其中的定语从句。
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·具体的“物”的名词
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又过了几个月，我看见他们手上戴了结婚戒指。可是他们不像以前那样健谈了，她又在看书，他在看报。
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Months later, rings appeared glistening on their fingers but chatting was gradually replaced by reading, one with a book the other a newspaper.
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我看见他们手上戴了结婚戒指→rings appeared glistening on their fingers!
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Impersonal Subject Sentence还有减字功能，汉语原句中的“我看见”自然省却！
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我或许是在发泄心中无法诉说的一种情绪，或是在构思一首暂时还羞于见人的小诗，或是再次拿起久违的彩笔勾勒童年的彩虹，请你让我信笔驰骋。
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It may be that I’m venting some pent-up feelings long denied expression, or trying to compose a little poem not yet presentable for the time being, or attempting to sketch out something visualized from my childhood memories which glows in my mind like a rainbow. When I am in such a mood, please leave me alone and let me write as the pen dictates.
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原句句未的“请你让我信笔驰骋”以“你”为主体，如果直译，译文势必僵硬，不料，译者笔锋陡转，以pen作主语，以dictate（指令；指示）作谓语，译文顿趋简洁地道。
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·Impersonal Subject Sentence审美价值
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一篇题为《珍惜感情》的文章，仅530个字，却精致秀逸，美若盆景。文章巧取一个生活截面，写人叙事，寓意隽永。已婚者，未婚者，读后内心都会泛起层层涟漪。
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珍惜感情
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那是一个秋日微凉的黄昏。
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刚跟丈夫怄过气，一头湿漉漉的乱发披散，站在院子的当口，让风使劲吹着。
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“过来！坏脾气妞！”说话的当儿，丈夫已拿着电吹风从房里走出来。没好意思再别扭，便拉过一把椅子顺从地坐下来。就这样，面对着满院子灿烂的花，不说一句话，心中的怨恨却已全消了。
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一头雾气渐渐散尽了，耳畔不时地有一种湿热的感觉。
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“也许，多年后的一个黄昏，像现在，你一人独坐的时候，你会想起眼前的这一刻的。”沉默了很长时间的丈夫，突然说出这样的话来，而且在声音中还带着一丝藏不住的伤感。“那你呢？”
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丈夫关掉了手中的吹风机，看了我一眼，笑笑，然后，甩手摆正我的头，手中的电吹风又响了起来，好一会儿才说：
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“先你而去了。”
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