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（W. J. B. Fletcher译）
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韵味气质，变味了。很遗憾。李白的诗，洋溢广义的美，模糊的美。当然我们也承认，李白当时当地所想，也许有sweet的成分，也许有her clear face的内容，然而译者尚不熟悉一个基本的语言哲学理念：模糊（fuzziness）是一种艺术，一种语言美，更是诗歌的美。如此翻译，无异于嚼饭与人。
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g. Night Thoughts
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In front of my bed the moonlight is very bright.
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I wonder if that can be frost on the floor.
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I lift up my head and look at the full moon, the dazzling moon.
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I drop my head, and think of the home of old days.
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（Amy Lowell译）
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the dazzling moon属于遣词不当。而the home of old days则缺乏far-off home的神韵气质。
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h. Thoughts in a Tranquil Night
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Athwart the bed
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I watch the moonbeams cast a trail
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So bright, so cold, so frail,
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That for a space it gleams
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Like hoarfrost on the margin of my dreams.
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I raise my head,—
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The splendid moon I see:
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Then droop my head,
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And sink to dreams of thee—
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My father land, of thee!
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（L. Cranmer-Byng译）
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就表象美而言，有创新。若问翻译有何步骤？答：主要分为理解和表达两步。遗憾的是，译者将“故乡”译成My father land与第六首诗的her clear face，异曲同工，不过，此曲并不妙。
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i. Nostalgia
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A splash of white on my bedroom floor. Hoarfrost?
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I raise my eyes to the moon, the same moon.
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