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I lift up my head and look at the full moon, the dazzling moon.
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I drop my head, and think of the home of old days.
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（Amy Lowell译）
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the dazzling moon属于遣词不当。而the home of old days则缺乏far-off home的神韵气质。
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h. Thoughts in a Tranquil Night
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Athwart the bed
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I watch the moonbeams cast a trail
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So bright, so cold, so frail,
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That for a space it gleams
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Like hoarfrost on the margin of my dreams.
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I raise my head,—
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The splendid moon I see:
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Then droop my head,
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And sink to dreams of thee—
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My father land, of thee!
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（L. Cranmer-Byng译）
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就表象美而言，有创新。若问翻译有何步骤？答：主要分为理解和表达两步。遗憾的是，译者将“故乡”译成My father land与第六首诗的her clear face，异曲同工，不过，此曲并不妙。
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i. Nostalgia
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A splash of white on my bedroom floor. Hoarfrost?
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I raise my eyes to the moon, the same moon.
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As scenes long past come to mind, my eyes fall again on the splash
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of white, and my heart aches for home.
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（翁显良译）
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最佳是开头——A splash of white on my bedroom floor. Hoarfrost？最陋是结尾——my heart aches for home。当然，思乡之情，十有九涩。但绝非一个ache（痛）所能囊括。且情感的这一层纸不能捅破，一旦捅破，诗意全无。
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j. Still Night Thoughts
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